Hey everyone! Long time lurker first time poster. I’ve just finished a new VSL targeting predominantly Shopify agencies. Would love any feedback on what I can improve as this is the prototype on clickfunnels while we build something better looking on webflow: https://www.blitzcommerce.io/agencies

1. Icons' styles aren't consistent (those after the "Enable, Enhance, Extend" section caught my eye specifically*).* 2. Not consistent spacing/margins. 3. Sometimes "Book a call" button is too wide. 4. Not consistent colors sometimes through the website. 5. You may beatify the hero section in some way. E.g., split the block into two parts horizontally, put the video on the right without margins while the text will be on the left. Also, you may reduce the text there, it's too much to read for the first time. Otherwise, it's generally good-looking. Great job!

Thank you @Sergiy Ch. ! I’ll take another look at it with your feedback in mind 🙏

Hi @Charles Nicolson, late to this conversation but I would love to see if I can help here. Here are my suggestions - 1. CTA color consistency is something I strongly recommend. It's green in some spots and blue in some. The icons used are also different. 2. If you're using video on the first page, make sure you use a catchy thumbnail. If you're using cold email outreach, I can help you with some techniques that my customers have used through my platform ( Disclaimer - I am the founder of Nexweave - https://nexweave.com) 3. Show more wins, if you have them. They are the strongest element of a VSL page. 4. Put a value to the benefit, don't leave the calculations to your prospects.