Greetings Peeps! I’m Thorgs fm Sweden. Former SW ...
# introduce-yourself
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Greetings Peeps! I’m Thorgs fm Sweden. Former SW founder having worked in SF Bay Area, London and now back in Swe. I’m now sparring first time founders with growth & funding. Just released a self-service platform for this purpose during CV19. It’s www.pitchago.com Wud love your brutally honest feedback 🤗. Luv fm da North!
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Hey Thorgs, Greetings from Australia! I think you would dramatically increase your lead flow by simplifying your home page. The smarter way to accelerate your growth is vague, but the graphic here is really clear and desirable. "Get your free growth score" Enter your email below to to get a free assessment and discover xyz... I got lost at the part about task management. The dashboard looks AMAZING. If you cna sell me on the growth score first and then reveal a complete suite of tools to help me take action on insights that could really help for lead generation and growth. Would be very interested in how this performs with a split test.
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@Josh Thanks Mate for this super valuable feedback! We will take it onboard and experiment. Wud love your add’l feedback as you test the system in anger 🙂 i.e. the Initial Assessment and the Sign-up to try the LevlUpWizard. Cheerz!
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Hahaha test the system in anger 🤣
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Yeah, that’s what we used to say when I developed enterprise software for shipping companies - that could not fail 😉 We actually had offices in both Sydney and Melbourne back in the day. Loved my trips to Australia! Fab memories! Hope to back soon now that we are post CV19! 😍
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Welcome @Thorgeir Einarsson thank you for joining our community, it's great to have you here! if you have any growth related questions post on #C01E1JPNP6Y 🚀
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Yeah to 2nd what @Josh said, I'd try and trim down the hero section for starters. As an example, instead of saying "the smarter way to..." you could cut to the chase and immediately tell people why it's smarter. Simply having "Quickly identify your startup’s strengths, weaknesses and opportunities in ten minutes." could be a good hero headline.
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Heaps of thanks @Robbie King for this valuable feedback in addition to @Josh! We’re gonna experiment a bit with this messaging. Love the “hero” headline idea! If you guys have time and interest, I would love your feedback too on the actual experience of using the product! Peaceful Greetings fm Sweden!
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Also, a good conversion hack worth testing is adding the questions upfront and the contact details at the end. People will start the questions out of curiosity and opt-in to get the answers after investing all that time to get their results
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No worries @Thorgeir Einarsson. Feel free to send over questions or updates about the copy/UX and I'll see if I can advise
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Thanks @Robbie King! If and when you have time, take deeper dip into the app (requires free sign up from the Initial Assessment) and especially run thru a few LevelUpWizard for any biz area that tickles your fancy. We have a new Typeform that we will include soon to those users who have signed up. Have a soulful Sunday 😍