Hello everyone. I am trying to perfect my copywrit...
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Nick Reijmerink
06/21/2021, 12:21 PMHello everyone. I am trying to perfect my copywriting for my homepage. If you are a technical person could you have a quick look at my homepage and give some feedback if you have some? I am happy to help you with any Digital marketing questions about SEO, SEA, Social in return. Redkubes.com
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Lucas gomes de santana
06/21/2021, 12:39 PMAllow me be pick. Also trying perfect my copywriting skills.
To big opening. If you are talking to dev, use k8 abbreviation, will fill more intimacy.
And try get an opening phrase with 8 or less words.
Lucas gomes de santana
06/21/2021, 12:40 PMK8's can be simpler, can be cost efficient.Lucas gomes de santana
06/21/2021, 12:41 PMOtomi makes K8's simpler and cost efficient.Lucas gomes de santana
06/21/2021, 12:43 PMk8's are awesome we know, Otomi makes they know.Lucas gomes de santana
06/21/2021, 12:43 PMthis last one have 9 words, but anyway
Lucas gomes de santana
06/21/2021, 12:45 PMthe bigger paragraph you can explain not how, who , but why? Why you belive that k8+otomi will became the new standart for K8 adoption? Sell your dream.
Lucas gomes de santana
06/21/2021, 12:45 PMand have one button. What you really want? Demo requests or view page on documentation? Give only one option.
Lucas gomes de santana
06/21/2021, 12:47 PMSorry if Iām being to much pick. This is what Iām learning on copywriting deep studies. I also struggle with this part of the job
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Nick Reijmerink
06/22/2021, 7:53 AMHey @Lucas gomes de santana I asked for feedback and you delivered! Thank you my friend. Let me know if there is anything I can do in return.
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