I am launching a new service, and would like your ...
# ask-a-growth-question
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I am launching a new service, and would like your help deciding which landing page to go for: A or B?
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Can you try this. Use A but use the copy from B. Make the image on the right bigger but remove the box/background rectangle as you already have it behind the logos. Keep the rainbox shadow behind the lines etc. may need some tweaks but can come up really nice. The heading can be the same style as B, but keep the text and buttons black. B is too big in a way and you need to scroll to see it A and the image. Also is Yay a person or an app? If it’s a person the middle of the graphic should be his image.
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@Darjan Hren this was a fantastic feedback! I did the changes as you have suggested and it does look much better! Thanks a lot
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yes that is much better.
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Nice! Bot sure what you have below but try to have the next section at around 700px so it’s visible somewhat so the user knows there’s more and scroll. Kind of like “something is tixking out” from below. Doesn’t need to be fully visible, just “there”. Also the top (and maybe bottom) white space seems to be a bit too big. 1/2 would be better so things are more compact. Subtle changes but should make it all nicer. I like how you made only 1 CTA visible (black) and you didn’y make the one in header the same style. While they seem to do the same thing they would fight for attention if they would be the same. 👍
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Thanks a lot @Darjan Hren I will make these changes too. I also made the rainbow background more transparent to ensure the focus is on logos not the background
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Perfect 👍